Friday, April 29, 2011

Visitors

A few cats milled around in the clearing, others in dens. Breezenight led in a hunting patrol, and deposited his catch on the pile. The kits tumbled around warriors feet. Palmstar gazed around the clan, glad at how close his clan had become. Suddenly, some cats burst into the clearing, and another cat walked in slower, supporting a she-cat. Palmstar lept to his feet, surprised, no one had scented these cats eariler. He unsheathed his claws. "Why are you here?" he growled. A small tom who seemed like the head of the group stepped forward. "I am Orochi. We are here because we need help." Orochi's icy calm was unsettling. "Our band needs a place to stay. We will help you in any way we can." Palmstar was surprised at the tom's efficencey, but shethed his claws. "Why should we help you?" he asked, looking Orochi in the eye. "Because we need help." Sandstar looked them over, the group didnt seem hostile, just strange. "Fine." he meowed. "But if there is any trouble, you will be forced to leave immeadiatly. Orochi nodded, still holding a strage sense of calm.

(I will add the cats on the left sidebar. ANyone who wants to play a visitor, please comment under here.)
(Also for those who play the cats, none of the cats exept for Orochi know why thier here, and Orochi is the only one who's any bit hostile or strage. Everyone else is normal)

13 comments:

  1. (What do the other cats look like? Chrimson, Blight, Nagi, Daitangu, and Namahage)

    Flameclaw glanced wearily at the new comers. "What do the need help with?" He asked Palmstar, "I mean, what if they caused themselves to need help, and bring the trouble to SandClan?"

    Ambertail watched silently.

    Willowpaw wasn't afraid of these cats. She padded over and introduced herself.

    Shiverkit watched curiously.

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  2. (Chimson is rea, BLight is brown tabby, Nagi is tortie, Dainangu is gray, Namahage is black)

    Palmstar looked around, and took Flameclaw aside. "I dont have any idea why theri here." he whispered. "But if we kick them out, they may find another clan, and tell them about us, and that could cause us to become enemies. Also, it only seems like Orochi is....mysterious. The others SEEM fine."

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  3. Applefeather looked at the visitor for a heartbeat before padding into the warriors den.

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  4. (Can I play Chrimson and Blight?)

    Flameclaw nodded slowly, taking in what he had said. "That's a good point. So we'll have to keep an eye on him, right?"

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  5. Palmstar nodded. "You and Applefeather make sure that theres at least one warrior with them at all times, or at least with Orochi."

    (Sure and Sure!)
    (Btw, to those who are wondering, the names are names of mosters and enemies from the wii game Okami. Orochi is the main threat of the game, an 8 headed dragon, Ichiro is the name of a charh. Mezuki and Gozuki are the names of the paired ogres, Chrimson is fro Chrimson Helm, a fire-bull thing, Blight is a sworb bearing demon, Daitangu and Namahage are imp spirits, and Nagi is the biggest evil. None of this is refecting in the cats, but I was at a loss for names.)

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  6. (LOL I like the names :3 And I like the personality/pictures for Chrimson and Blight, they match me :D)

    Flameclaw nodded and padded over to Applefeather, he whispered to her what Palmstar had said about the black tom.

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  7. (lol. I coundnt do too much personalities, cause im not the one playing them, but I did what could. I also tried to match their personalities to the game)

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  8. Willowpaw padded over to the new cats as well as Ambertail. They wanted to get to know the strangers that had come to their clans camp.

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  9. Flamebreeze was eying Orochi coldly. He sat down and carefully looked over the whole group.
    "Huh.." he meowed to himself. He padded over to a grey strong muscled tom and grinned.
    "Hey. My name's Flamebreeze." he said in a friendly tone. The cat grinned back.
    "I'm Gazuki." he meowed, his ears perked with interest. "I bet it can get tough to handle everything around here. Even if your not a Deputy." he added. Flamebreeze nodded stiffly, hoping the cat wasn't being sarcastic.
    "Yeah. Sometimes." Gazuki noticed his mistake and instantly corrected it.
    "I wasn't being sarcastic! I was serious! Sorry, Flamebreeze." he ducked his head as a friendly and submissive gesture and smiled. Flamebreeze dipped his head in response.
    "I wanna meet the others," Flamebreeze meowed suddenly. He walked over to Orochi and kept his ears half way back, as if slightly annoyed. He sat down and curled his tail around his strong paws. He flexed his shoulder muscles and then spoke.
    "Hi. Your Orochi, right? I'm Flamebreeze."

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  10. "I am Orochi. Pleasure to meet you." Orochi was stotic, not looking at Flamebreeze, but his tone was not icy, but held no feeling.

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  11. Ambertail cocked her head slightly, "Good.. I guess."

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  12. "Where are you from?" Ambertail cocked her head slightly. Curiousity clear in her emerald green eyes.

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